• pageflight@piefed.social
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    4 days ago

    I don’t think it’s great writing. To me, regardless of AI involvement, it sounds like it’s trying hard to be punchy. Big ideas, big impact! But the lack of structural variation and generic vocabulary make it bland, and bland writing doesn’t tickle one’s imagination or stick in one’s memory.

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      It’s not necessarily great writing, but this style is an effective communication mode. There’s a reason that AI uses it, and it’s because it works. 🤷‍♂️

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      Bland can have an impact. The man turned to hookers and blow instead of dusty libraries, cut him a break.