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Just in case anyone was wondering, tapirs are very athletic and profuse urinators.
Huh, “profuse and athletic urinators” is better grammar.
But the original lists two qualities: athleticism and urination quantity. You’ve reduced them to urinators. What does “athletic urination” even entail?
That’s going to be bad news for New York if it comes with the power of habitat loss.



